One step
At a time
Today your body
Tomorrow your mind.
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Re: Untitled 1
Is this about controlling? Or consoling? I think it should be the other way around:
Today your mind,
Tomorrow your bod,
One step at a time,
Plod-itty-plod.
I prefer your Teletype piece. It has more rhythm, and perfect punctuation.
Today your mind,
Tomorrow your bod,
One step at a time,
Plod-itty-plod.
I prefer your Teletype piece. It has more rhythm, and perfect punctuation.