No More Sacrifices ( dedicated to the story of Issac )

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George.Wright
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No More Sacrifices ( dedicated to the story of Issac )

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The golden fleeced lamb lay sacrificed on the cross
an artificial sentiment for the pain of the loss
a dissection of truth and the clouding of sin
untying our conscience and strengthening our faith within
the knowledge that to kill for him a fatted calf
will wash away our misgivings on his behalf
to even attempt to sacrifice our own
thinking it to be the ultimate atonement
shows that man has lost the primeval knowledge alone
that did not sully his lips like the sweet apple
that awakened hormones and the desire to sample
No more the need for sacrifices on the altar!
Man is the ultimate, his faith never faulters
No more the beating of the Ram!
impaled on the wood, it's blood like thick jam
Man is the ultimate decider
His death alone will open the cypher!
Georges
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
Ben Kelly
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Post by Ben Kelly »

Gearge

Poor lonely peom without a reply
Oh there nothing more deflated
than being ignored.
You're not sexy enough
But tonight son you've
SCORED

Ben
Life rewards action, just as well done is better than well said. Yours the Galactic Pixie
George.Wright
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Location: Bangor, N.Ireland

Post by George.Wright »

Thank you for scoring me, Ben
Georges
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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