So Brave And So Sweet
- Mark A. Murphy
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Re: So Brave And So Sweet
I wish to change the title of this poem to 'Chelsea Hotel #2, A Reprise' since the poem is as much a response to Nora singing Chelsea Hotel #2 for me, as much as it is anything else. I would be pleased to know what anyone thinks of this. Please advise.
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Re: So Brave And So Sweet
I think it is way better than "So Brave and So Sweet", that's for sure!Mark A. Murphy wrote:I wish to change the title of this poem to 'Chelsea Hotel #2, A Reprise' since the poem is as much a response to Nora singing Chelsea Hotel #2 for me, as much as it is anything else. I would be pleased to know what anyone thinks of this. Please advise.
Re: So Brave And So Sweet
Hi Mark ~
Your original title relates as much to your personal knowledge as it does your poem. Your new choice, which works for me, too, doesn't have immediate connections to the song, but can be understood more easily in that context... and for you, with her dedication. I like " . . . A Reprise."
~ Lizzy
Your original title relates as much to your personal knowledge as it does your poem. Your new choice, which works for me, too, doesn't have immediate connections to the song, but can be understood more easily in that context... and for you, with her dedication. I like " . . . A Reprise."
~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
Re: So Brave And So Sweet
You should call it simply "Nora".Mark wrote:I wish to change the title of this poem...
As I believe you noted in another thread,
Bob Dylan and Leonard Cohen are, for all
practical purposes, interchangeable.
In this case Bob Dylan wrote the relevant song.
The one containing the lines
He called it simply "Sara".I can still hear the sounds of those Methodist bells,
I'd taken the cure and had just gotten through,
Stayin' up for days in the Chelsea Hotel,
Writin' "Sad-Eyed Lady of the Lowlands" for you.
Re: So Brave And So Sweet
Hi Mark ~
As good as your idea was, I must retrieve my earlier endorsement.
Who could not truly agree with the simple beauty of Greg's suggestion... it's the truth.
~ Lizzy
As good as your idea was, I must retrieve my earlier endorsement.
Who could not truly agree with the simple beauty of Greg's suggestion... it's the truth.
~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde