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LaurieAK
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Mille Grazie.

Salute!
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Post by lizzytysh »

Excellent job of judging, Laurie... I know how difficult it was! Even so, I'm very pleased with the results. It's a tough job, but somebody's gotta do it ~ I'm so glad that somebody was you :wink: . No question on First Place 8) .

Now, you can focus solely on Italy... poor dear :D .

~ Lizzy
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I hate to interrupt such reparte but I will to sort of claim Poem A. Actually, I did not send the correct iteration to Liz, typical of me these days, but even revised it isn't much better. The next to last line should be:

"Remembering a few bring no warm memory, but"

And thus the first letters of each line would spell 'Ti Amore'. Ah, me, I shall go on, albeit with my head a little lower for a few hours and a smirk on me face........ 'Tha bes lai plae o mi i mahn ging aft aglay' (if that's somewhat close to Middle English as I remember that).
"For the captain had quitted the long drawn strife
And in far Simoree had taken a wife." (R Kipling)
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Hi Nightstalker~

Terribly clever! the double-entendre of 'love letters' and the Italian version of "love letters" 8) I missed the acronym potential while judging. Of course now that you point it out it is obvious.

Good piece! And again, love the double entendre!

Laurie

p.s. Almost forgot-Thanks Liz for your support.
Diane

Post by Diane »

I add my thanks to both of you, Lizzy and Laurie, for the work you put in. I had never seriously tried to write a poem before and enjoyed the challenge and the therapy of doing it, even though I moaned a lot.

Have a great time in Italy, Laurie. I doubt that I will arrive in Alaska with your mini before you return from your travels, but I'll try to put a spurt on.

Diane
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Post by LaurieAK »

Thanks Diane. You should consider playing with poetry more often, now that you got your toe in the water...It does 'hurt so good' 8)

congrats again,
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Post by Diane »

Cheers, Laurie. Well, I will, at least, eventually, aim to finish the two poems I started and abandoned whilst preparing for this comp. Ta for your encouragement.

Diane
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Post by Charles »

Thanks Laurie for all the hard work in judging the contest. A job well done.


Charles


P.S. and thanks to Lizzie for the hassle of gathering them all together.
Diane

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...and thanks Michael for getting the whole thing going in the first place.
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Thank you, Charles... and Michael... and Laurie... and all you writers of poetry! I still need to comment on them, as well as the remainder of the short stories that preceded them :roll: .

~ Lizzy
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Post by mickey_one »

Diane wrote:...and thanks Michael for getting the whole thing going in the first place.
well, Doll, I told you the fix was on but you ain't given me half the split yet and a guy can get nasty waitin' for some action that is rightfully his, I will give you 'til Tuesday next week, say 7 p.m., then I is cumming for ya'
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lizzytysh wrote:Thank you, Charles... and Michael... and Laurie... and all you writers of poetry! I still need to comment on them, as well as the remainder of the short stories that preceded them :roll: .

~ Lizzy
when is Laurie going to announce the results, did I win? did I?
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Post by lizzytysh »

Of course, you won, mickey_one ~ you always win... that's how it's arranged.

< * how soon they forget :roll: * >


~ Lizzy missing Vincent
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well, Doll, I told you the fix was on but you ain't given me half the split yet and a guy can get nasty waitin' for some action that is rightfully his, I will give you 'til Tuesday next week, say 7 p.m., then I is cumming for ya'
Shhhhhhh Mikey! You'll get your split of the prize money, but we don't want it to get out that this whole thing was a fix. Let's hope the story about Laurie having "gone to Italy" holds.

Oh hell, I think I may need a good lawyer.
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Diane wrote:
well, Doll, I told you the fix was on but you ain't given me half the split yet and a guy can get nasty waitin' for some action that is rightfully his, I will give you 'til Tuesday next week, say 7 p.m., then I is cumming for ya'
Shhhhhhh Mikey! You'll get your split of the prize money, but we don't want it to get out that this whole thing was a fix. Let's hope the story about Laurie having "gone to Italy" holds.

Oh hell, I think I may need a good lawyer.
can't help you there. I would like to give you a leg-up but it may be too hard.
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