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- Nightstalker
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I hate to interrupt such reparte but I will to sort of claim Poem A. Actually, I did not send the correct iteration to Liz, typical of me these days, but even revised it isn't much better. The next to last line should be:
"Remembering a few bring no warm memory, but"
And thus the first letters of each line would spell 'Ti Amore'. Ah, me, I shall go on, albeit with my head a little lower for a few hours and a smirk on me face........ 'Tha bes lai plae o mi i mahn ging aft aglay' (if that's somewhat close to Middle English as I remember that).
"Remembering a few bring no warm memory, but"
And thus the first letters of each line would spell 'Ti Amore'. Ah, me, I shall go on, albeit with my head a little lower for a few hours and a smirk on me face........ 'Tha bes lai plae o mi i mahn ging aft aglay' (if that's somewhat close to Middle English as I remember that).
"For the captain had quitted the long drawn strife
And in far Simoree had taken a wife." (R Kipling)
And in far Simoree had taken a wife." (R Kipling)
Hi Nightstalker~
Terribly clever! the double-entendre of 'love letters' and the Italian version of "love letters"
I missed the acronym potential while judging. Of course now that you point it out it is obvious.
Good piece! And again, love the double entendre!
Laurie
p.s. Almost forgot-Thanks Liz for your support.
Terribly clever! the double-entendre of 'love letters' and the Italian version of "love letters"

Good piece! And again, love the double entendre!
Laurie
p.s. Almost forgot-Thanks Liz for your support.
I add my thanks to both of you, Lizzy and Laurie, for the work you put in. I had never seriously tried to write a poem before and enjoyed the challenge and the therapy of doing it, even though I moaned a lot.
Have a great time in Italy, Laurie. I doubt that I will arrive in Alaska with your mini before you return from your travels, but I'll try to put a spurt on.
Diane
Have a great time in Italy, Laurie. I doubt that I will arrive in Alaska with your mini before you return from your travels, but I'll try to put a spurt on.
Diane
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well, Doll, I told you the fix was on but you ain't given me half the split yet and a guy can get nasty waitin' for some action that is rightfully his, I will give you 'til Tuesday next week, say 7 p.m., then I is cumming for ya'Diane wrote:...and thanks Michael for getting the whole thing going in the first place.
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Shhhhhhh Mikey! You'll get your split of the prize money, but we don't want it to get out that this whole thing was a fix. Let's hope the story about Laurie having "gone to Italy" holds.well, Doll, I told you the fix was on but you ain't given me half the split yet and a guy can get nasty waitin' for some action that is rightfully his, I will give you 'til Tuesday next week, say 7 p.m., then I is cumming for ya'
Oh hell, I think I may need a good lawyer.
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can't help you there. I would like to give you a leg-up but it may be too hard.Diane wrote:Shhhhhhh Mikey! You'll get your split of the prize money, but we don't want it to get out that this whole thing was a fix. Let's hope the story about Laurie having "gone to Italy" holds.well, Doll, I told you the fix was on but you ain't given me half the split yet and a guy can get nasty waitin' for some action that is rightfully his, I will give you 'til Tuesday next week, say 7 p.m., then I is cumming for ya'
Oh hell, I think I may need a good lawyer.