Cate wrote:Hello Fish
I'm going to critique your critique
First - The red socks must go. They clash completely with your green trousers.
second - I NEED YOU TO START YELLING? It really turns me on when people YELL!!! Is your cap stuck?why dont you take it off and doff it to me as a sign of enduring respect
Third - I think that Jimmy's poem is mush
Cate, thanks for your fashion advice and I am sure you have inspired Jimmy by describing his poem as "mush".