our eyes

[quarterpasttwelve]

i love the way
you move when
you try to be better
than yesterday
i try too but i fail
in my eyes
because i am not sure
how close you are
that's the way we always end it
another goodbye
another love for you
another something for me
maybe someday our eyes
will be there
keep moving maybe we can try
no talking just moving
i don't want to be afraid of you
i just want us to try to be ourselves.
I always miss you
more than yesterday

[fishfishquaileye]

yes, you did "fail in my eyes"; there you were consistently humble and lower case and then SMACK! KAPOW! you end "I always miss you", a shouting, bragging, self-pitying upper case ego-filled declaration. I was so distressed by that switch that I cried my i's out.

Please, I beg you- don't do that ever again to me.

[pelican]

wrong mirrors. That's allright.