Kneel and pray

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lonndubh
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Kneel and pray

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Kneel and pray-
Utter not a word
From your lips
Or in your heart
It will rise in you
Like waves
across a field
On a July day
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Boss
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Let it rise
Let it rise
'In the depth of winter, I finally learned that within me there lay an invincible summer' - Albert Camus
Cate
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This has a nice feel to it Lonndubh - calming.
Like waves
across a field
I like that - it suites that internal type of feeling that can come with wordless prayer or meditation.
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mat james
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Like waves
across a field
???
Seeds for thought. :!:
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
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Gullivor
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lonndubh,
I like it alot!

God Bless,
Gully
We’ve all come to
This moment
To find out
Who we are.
Painted colors
Scribed words
Sweetly found.
~Gully~
lonndubh
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Hi Cate Mat and Gully
Thank you for your kind words and attention.

when Matt wrote his last piece 'Though i Stagger ' it reminded me of this piece which was hidden away somewhere
it also reminds me of my father who knelt fervently every night to pray and my mother who would say to our delight when someone chanced to call in the evening and stayed late "I think we'll say our own few tonight "
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