Don't be too concerned
when this heart starts crying
That's how it is
for the newly born
No Need For Concern
No Need For Concern
Last edited by lazariuk on Sun Feb 10, 2008 5:19 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
Re: No Need For Concern
Jack,
A nice poem, succinct and pregnant with possible inferences (for readers to think
about).
A nice poem, succinct and pregnant with possible inferences (for readers to think
about).
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Steven
Surely it's more post-natal than pregnant!
(My little joke)
A lovely piece Lazariuk
Surely it's more post-natal than pregnant!
(My little joke)
A lovely piece Lazariuk
Re: No Need For Concern
succinct poetic genius, Jack
daka
daka
If you don't become the ocean you will be seasick every day....Jikan (aka Leonard Cohen)
It's comin' from the feel that this ain't exactly real, or it's real, but it ain't exactly there! . Jikan
It's comin' from the feel that this ain't exactly real, or it's real, but it ain't exactly there! . Jikan
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Jack, this is beautiful on many levels. It hit me like the sound of cathedral bells in the morning.
"It's coming like the tidal flood beneath the lunar sway;
imperial, mysterious, in amorous array..."
imperial, mysterious, in amorous array..."
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I'm thinking of changing it tolightedpalace wrote:Jack, this is beautiful on many levels. It hit me like the sound of cathedral bells in the morning.
Don't be too concerned
when this bread starts baking
That's how it is
for the newly warmed.
The sound of the bells reminded me of the bread making I do.
Everything being said to you is true; Imagine of what it is true.
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*laughing*
that's much better! why speak of hearts and birth when one can enjoy baked goods, fresh from the oven of the immortal kitchen?!
that's much better! why speak of hearts and birth when one can enjoy baked goods, fresh from the oven of the immortal kitchen?!
"It's coming like the tidal flood beneath the lunar sway;
imperial, mysterious, in amorous array..."
imperial, mysterious, in amorous array..."
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[quote=
Don't be too concerned
when this bread starts baking
That's how it is
for the newly warmed.
The sound of the bells reminded me of the bread making I do.[/quote]
Jack the baker
putting buns in the oven
thats how his spirit wakens
to the dawn of life
Don't be too concerned
when this bread starts baking
That's how it is
for the newly warmed.
The sound of the bells reminded me of the bread making I do.[/quote]
Jack the baker
putting buns in the oven
thats how his spirit wakens
to the dawn of life
love is not forgotten......
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lightedpalace
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Jack the bakerjimbo wrote:[quote=
Don't be too concerned
when this bread starts baking
That's how it is
for the newly warmed.
The sound of the bells reminded me of the bread making I do.
putting buns in the oven
thats how his spirit wakens
to the dawn of life[/quote]
you guys are both totally bizarre! <3
"It's coming like the tidal flood beneath the lunar sway;
imperial, mysterious, in amorous array..."
imperial, mysterious, in amorous array..."