drop of Love

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Iubita
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drop of Love

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If you feel alone
go outside and see
the very near tree.
There a small drop
as my tear
is gliding onto
a maple leaf
and trying
to disappear...
Look at the trace
and memorize its
very strange way
And if you touch it
with love and say:
"Where is My Dream? Where?"
I am coming soon
to remind you anew
how easy your dream
can become true...
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Post by tom.d.stiller »

Beautiful... Very sad, but at the same time filled with a warm hope... I like this poem.

Welcome to the forum, Iubita. Please feel at home, and post more like that...

Tom
John the Shorts
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Post by John the Shorts »

Shwmae Iubita

Welcome to the forum.

JTS
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Post by lizzytysh »

Hi Iubita ~

Welcome to the Forum. The image of a tear falling onto a maple leaf evokes an even deeper kind of sadness. Seeking comfort in nature is something many of us do during our sad and lonely times. It brings to mind some of the feelings I've had when I've gone there.

~ Lizzytysh
Iubita
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thank you, friends...

Post by Iubita »

hello,
It was very nice to see your letters...this's given me a sign that someone is there with me...exactly what I need...nobody likes to feel lonely... :D
thanks a lot, friends...
Love, Light
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