The Wonder

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silvergreen
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The Wonder

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LC's "Undertow":

(...) With a child in my arms
And a chill in my soul
And my heart the shape
Of a begging bowl
...

I dared to borrow his last words of this song to beautify my poem "The wonder"
Hope he will forgive me for this ...

Your dark eyes as a velvet summer night my life have changed, an eternity ago,
Your kind and warm and gentle, special and distinctive smile has made me love you so,
Your entire so-loved-by-me body is strongly bein’ claimed by my ardent senses,
Your whole so exquisite remarkable beloved being my creative secret inner life enhances ...

My soul has been ruled by your dearest recollection for so many years,
My eyes have sadly wept my heartrending-for-you longing in sorrowful tears,
I use to name you my beloved and the wonder in my meaningless and without-you-in-it so desert life,
The cure-all relief to heal my so unbearable, insufferable, inner strife ...

Don’t be afraid to love my so-different-of-whatever-you-may-know and special soul,
Don’t push away my full-of-love-for-you heart in shape of a begging bowl ...
Waiting for the miracle to come...
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A very gentle, beautiful soul comes through your words, Silvergreen.


~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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Re: The Wonder

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lizzytysh wrote:A very gentle, beautiful soul comes through your words, Silvergreen.


~ Lizzy


A full-of-love-for-someone-special soul, Lizzy.
And a sad one in the same time ...
Waiting for the miracle to come...
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Re: The Wonder

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A full-of-love-for-someone-special soul, Lizzy.
And a sad one in the same time ...
There's nothing to say to that except I understand how both can occupy the same space and time. True.


~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
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