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dangermouse
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This is certainly an intensely-backgrounded poem, DangerMouse.

Well done as a poem for processing justified pain and anger. I'm sorry to hear that such levels of both have confronted you in your early years. Betrayal from two, wholly unexpected directions... one far worse than the other. Protector turned betrayor and the makings of bitterness. A wound very difficult to heal. Possibly impossible.

I wish you healing.


~ Lizzy
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Dangermouse - this is amazing, so you, wonderful.
You only have to let the soft animal of your body
love what it loves.
from Wild Geese
Mary Oliver
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I'm sorry to hear about the estrangement with your mother, DangerMouse.
But this is my third nasty experience with guys in eighteen months
It sounds like some time alone may be soothing for your spirit.


~ Lizzy
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