Grieving (CTG)

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Christopher T. George
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Grieving (CTG)

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Grieving

Isolated in my grief, I drive downtown
to pick up Mom's prescription, decide
not to say her brother passed yesterday,
don't wish to spoil tonight's wedding
of the granddaughter of a late friend,
in which Mom will stand in for grandma.

Now, I am driving home wearing two
red baseball caps in honor of my uncle,
famous for wearing two ties to a funeral.
The world's shot; it's all bad news today.
Yet, on a streetcorner, a poet passes
out fresh copies of The Daily Word.

Christopher T. George
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Post by blonde madonna »

Love the mood of this poem and its apparent simplicity (but didn’t pick up on the Greek architecture).
If I read it right grandma should not be capitalized as this would be confusing. As I read it she is not your Grandma but the grandma of the bride.
The change from I to you really changes something though, it’s amazing the difference a little distance can make to in the way we see/feel things.
the art of longing’s over and it’s never coming back

1980 -- Comedy Theatre, Melbourne
1985 -- State Theatre, Melbourne
2008 -- Hamilton, Toronto, Cardiff
2009 -- Rochford Winery, Yarra Valley
2010 -- Melbourne
2013 -- Melbourne, The Hill Winery, Geelong, Auckland
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Post by Hero In The Seaweed »

I like your style, Chris.
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