Half of a Thought

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John K.
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Oh, dear, John... this is sad, depressing, and permeated by feelings of loneliness and hopelessness. I know you intended it that way or it wouldn't be. I have half a mind to give you the other half of a thought to balance this one. Did someone say, "Hey, John. Why don't you write a mood piece?"... because you certainly did.


~ Lizzy
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I love to speak with John
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He's a lazy banker living in a suit

http://www.johnkloberdanz.com
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Well, dang those papers on the table, anyway... covering up those hopes and dreams. Time to clear the table.

How's about the other, half of a thought, now? A hope-filled piece... the same couple... a way out of those doldrums and from under the trash heap? Interlocking hearts, so to speak, those two pieces.


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Lizzay
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I love to speak with John
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He's a lazy banker living in a suit

http://www.johnkloberdanz.com
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Later for Love ~ I want to read "Rock and Roll Audit" :lol: ! Jarkko can probably appreciate that one, too :) . We'll send him a PM if we have to... don't know that he reads the Member's Poetry section.


~ Lizzay
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