put the title

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Sun Jan 19, 2003 2:07 am

Can you put a title to this poem?

Walking around we are blind
Suddenly
A light blinks in a fan,
spreads out and touch us.
We can see...
The glances meet
It is love......
The light goes nimble,
smiles and moves away
with a mocking grin

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Sun Jan 19, 2003 3:54 am

Light Laughing Luminate
Georges

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Sun Jan 19, 2003 4:00 am

I would like to have many titles and see if some matches with the one I already gave to this poem

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Sun Jan 19, 2003 4:33 am

Awakening?
Georges

babz · Post by **babz** » Mon Jan 20, 2003 2:11 am

The Light That Blinds

babz · Post by **babz** » Mon Jan 20, 2003 2:31 am

Perhaps I was too terse.

The reference to 'mocking grin' in the last stanza
gives a flavour of irony to the piece.

And we all know the old cliche: Love is Blind!

So one blindness is traded for another.

but I could be wrong...

and then there was the takeoff on The Tie That Binds

wilcotree · Post by **wilcotree** » Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:09 am

Helpless

or

Clarity Charity (can't)[/i]

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Mon Jan 20, 2003 6:43 pm

Hello !
I dont think you were terse because I had forgotten that "love is blind" and it is true in a sense.....
Interesting thing to know that others dont always catch the real intention the poet had when writing his/her poem.......

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Wed Jan 22, 2003 7:34 pm

Hello!!!!
Thank you for your answers and sense of humour
I named that poem The transitory

put the title

put the title

To Sandra

thank you

to babz

the poem´s name