On Leaving a Church for the Last Time

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Bernard
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Location: Beyond the breakers, beyond the green deep, there I abide.

On Leaving a Church for the Last Time

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I am a true barbarian
Wrapped in thylacine skins
The church lays in ruins
Winter rushes in
And lays claims to the remains
Of the faithful's souls
Through the rubble
I can see an horizon
Somewhat east
Darkness closes behind me like a wound
I walk on
A dawn beckons
A healing spring awaits
From which I will drink the essence of my flesh
In light unbroken
Diane

Post by Diane »

Hi Bernard and welcome to the forum! Where are you from?

I really like this poem.
I am a true barbarian
Wrapped in thylacine skins
Oh yes, so am I!

Thanks!

Diane
Bernard
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Joined: Wed Mar 22, 2006 9:03 am
Location: Beyond the breakers, beyond the green deep, there I abide.

Post by Bernard »

Hi Diane,

Greetings from a coastal town in Australia. The surf begins to build for the Easter tides. I feel another poem coming on. :D

Seeya Bernard
In light unbroken
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Byron
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Post by Byron »

The thylacine, like the acrylic, is an endangered species. 8)

I belong to the NSPKA and we hold regular meetings.
"Bipolar is a roller-coaster ride without a seat belt. One day you're flying with the fireworks; for the next month you're being scraped off the trolley" I said that.
Diane

Post by Diane »

Byron, I thought you preferred to be wrapped in polystyrene skins :shock: .
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