something

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Sun Feb 05, 2006 4:56 am

something is happening
something between two
something is being born
they pretend it is not true
all is so fragile
all is pure
they do not know
what to do
they are grown up
but this is new

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Sun Feb 05, 2006 7:45 am

Great example of a poem about love, without using the word, Sandra

.

I also like the subtlety of its tension.

~ Lizzy

Cohen Kid · Post by **Cohen Kid** » Sun Feb 05, 2006 12:37 pm

Short and sweet

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Mon Feb 06, 2006 4:05 pm

thanks......

Boss · Post by **Boss** » Tue Feb 07, 2006 7:29 am

Sandra,

There is always hope and this poem gives me some.

Thank you

Boss

Kush · Post by **Kush** » Tue Feb 07, 2006 7:21 pm

Very subtle. Reminds me of one or two Jacques Prevert paroles.

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Tue Feb 07, 2006 8:27 pm

yes Boss there is....

Kush, this is the second time you relate a poem of mine with one of Prevert......I learnt about that poet because of your comment and he is very good, thanks Kush.

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Fri Feb 10, 2006 5:17 am

Hi Sandra ~

I showed this to a friend of mine who's recently met someone. She said, "I love that! I want a copy of it." It seemed to resonate with her

, which I had thought it might

.

Wanted to share that with you

.

~ Lizzy

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Fri Feb 10, 2006 5:41 pm

Nightstalker · Post by **Nightstalker** » Thu Feb 16, 2006 12:28 am

Sandra,
A subtle gem. TY

mat james · Post by **mat james** » Sat Nov 25, 2006 9:36 am

I found one Sandra!
It has been awhile since this was posted. Is there a part 2 to this delightful piece?

I am attracted to it's innocence,

all is so fragile
all is pure

and I wonder where this lovely moment led.

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Sun Nov 26, 2006 1:12 am

oh.......yes....now I remember that ...