haiku

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Fri Dec 02, 2005 5:40 pm

robles antiguos
ramas centinelas de
aves que anidan

group of ancient oaks
the black red hummingbird nests
inaudible cloth

(each language is not quite the same idea)

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Fri Dec 02, 2005 7:07 pm

Hi Sandra ~

I like the words you've chosen and the images ~ even though I've yet to put the meaning together. Time...

~ Lizzy

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Fri Dec 02, 2005 7:44 pm

ok lizzy...I am glad that my post 666 was so nice.

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Fri Dec 02, 2005 7:50 pm

OK, I know that you're not supposed to have to explain a poem ~ however, this is really a pleasant one that I'd like to understand.

Is the inaudible cloth the oaks that are holding the nests and the tiny birds?

Yes ~ for your 666, this was very nice

.

Love,
Lizzy

Sandra · Post by **Sandra** » Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:10 pm

yes.....

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:33 pm

Oh, good ~ I can rest easy, then....thanks, Sandra

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Love,
Lizzy