The Good Person

Kevin · Post by **Kevin** » Mon Nov 07, 2005 4:14 pm

it's 6:58
the end of the "affair"
and pasttime for tragedy
the "affair"
never earned its gently hugging quotes
I love my idea of you
though we use a different thesaurus
I never expected it to be
anything other than ridiculous

paula_hansen · Post by **paula_hansen** » Sun Nov 13, 2005 10:47 pm

Kevin wrote:it's 6:58
the end of the "affair"
and pasttime for tragedy
the "affair"
never earned its gently hugging quotes
I love my idea of you
though we use a different thesaurus
I never expected it to be
anything other than ridiculous

We are All God's Children, even the hopeless and the illiterate.

Kevin · Post by **Kevin** » Fri Nov 18, 2005 12:26 am

thank you, paula. I would have used 'unlettered' but I see your point.

Fljotsdale · Post by **Fljotsdale** » Fri Nov 18, 2005 3:53 am

I've read your poem 3 times now. I liked it better every time.

Teratogen · Post by **Teratogen** » Fri Nov 18, 2005 10:56 am

paula, you always seem to find yourself out of place wherever you rear your faith-mongering head. good lord!

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