I thought I'd have a try at another haiku, because I found that there is a haiku corner for us loonies? I don't know where this one came from but it appeared in my thoughts this morning and I like it. The weather is very cold today and it reminds me of my mother's funeral a year ago, when we all stood shivering, after her cremation. It isn't about my mother, but the loss felt by a partner. Each word has multiple meanings. See what you think of it.
Tears my heart slowly
breaking up I weep lowly
releasing ashes
My last goodbye
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Byron
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My last goodbye
"Bipolar is a roller-coaster ride without a seat belt. One day you're flying with the fireworks; for the next month you're being scraped off the trolley" I said that.
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George.Wright
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