OUT OF THE NIGHT

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greg
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OUT OF THE NIGHT

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I don't know if my writing qualifies as poetry... but here goes anyway...

The smoke, it hung
Over ther crowd
Over us all
Like a mushroom cloud

The girl on my left
I caught her eye -
She took a deep breath,
I started to sigh

The band, It played
It’s songs so loud
You could feel the noise
Like a studded shroud

I wish I was home
Or in mid-flight
Heading one way or the other
Out of the night

My wounds need salt,
So it’s salt that I weep
And where once they did heal
Now they’re mine to keep

The girl on my left,
She started to leave -
She moved like a lynx
With her back to the breeze

Now there is but one body;
Now just one soul,
The crowd, it is gone
For the crowd is now whole

I wish I was home
Or in mid-flight
Heading one way or the other
Out of the night

How it all started
I do not know;
One word out of place
Is a seed that will grow

The girl on my left
Turned again at the door;
Her smile half-true,
Her feet so unsure

And so the dance goes on -
An eternal waltz;
A rose in our teeth,
A beat in our pulse

But I wish I was home
Or in mid-flight
Heading one way or the other
Out of this night


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Vesuvius
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Post by Vesuvius »

Greg, On this site everone's writing qualifies as poetry. Welcome.
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Post by greg »

Thanks for the welcome.

Glad to have found the site.

greg
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Post by elazar »

greg,
"the girl on the left". there seems to be a phenomena of this.
i allways wondered,if i would aproach her,would she have a name??
saluté,and great poem.
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Post by Vesuvius »

I wish I could attend a party like this one, Greg. Sounds like fun!
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