Very short indeed

This is for your own works!!!
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Laura
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Very short indeed

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With our mouth we measured our love
from head to toe and inside out.
And now we find our love doesn't resist
to a few words wispered by our mouths...

This is just a joke; but I do find it sad when love poems begin to be written with the mind and not the heart.
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Love cannot be measured by the tongue
only from the heart
and only when the mind and body depart
Georges
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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Post by lizzytysh »

"....but I do find it sad when love poems begin to be written with the mind and not the heart"....thank you for saying that, Laura.
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Post by Vesuvius »

Yes, indeed, thank you Laura. Words of wisdom.
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To Georges:
We hold hands with our minds,
kiss with our hearts
and talk with our bodies.
That's love for me.

I don't like excluding any part of me when it's about love. I wrote that little poem for a love which was deep and honest-but missed the connection between minds-and made me bored and frustrated; and now I'm trying not to fall into a love which has no body-and it's beautiful, but makes me cold. But, I'm running out of topic...
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Post by Vesuvius »

Hands, hearts, minds, bodies. Very moving thoughts.
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