critique

[elazar]

Vandal copyists in the ravine
In other words your average teen
Get all up in the hip-hop
A flimsy phony reality sop
Trying to be superior and failing
Like those assholes who go whaling
False standard and fake medals
That go pick a flower’s pedals
She loves me she loves me not
Ya your momma’s kinda hot
Like and um replacing emotion
A conversation whack-off lotion
But they’re really just kids and all
They will be kids till dead they fall
Silly why do I even give a damn
I really should be comfortable .. with who I am