You told me

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Sandra
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You told me

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You told me about the “grand finale”:
dozens of fireworks launched all at once,
the light burning into the eyes´ memory,
rapid explosions echoing throughout the body
creating short gasps of breath.

If you know the secret,you said,
you must look away, for a moment,
from the instantly blooming flowers of light,
at your lover´s eyes,
there you will see the blossoms,
reflected,
in exquisitely delicate miniature.

The look upon the faces reveals
the innocence and wonder of childhood,
and shows
a part of beauty
you have rarely seen
and should never forget
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Beauty pours forth from you Sandra. You write so gently, yet cut into the heart to the essence of who we truly are.

"Bossy"
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(I am smiling now) thank you for your words Bossy.....! :)
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