one night love

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elazar
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one night love

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this is a song i wrote this morning about two nights ago.it's simplistic but true. kinda "baby" heavy, but it's a song so whatever.

One night love
I think I love you baby
One night love
Can’t stop thinking about you baby
One night love
Ain’t no way around it baby
One night love
I think I love you baby

You flew into my broken head
You warmed up my lonely bed
But now you’re flying on home
Leaving me like an unfinished poem

One night love
I think I love you baby
One night love
Can’t stop thinking about you baby
One night love
Ain’t no way around it baby
One night love
I think I love you baby

I won’t ever ever ever forget
The magic spell which you’ve set
It was a one night love baby
It was a one night love baby

One night love
I think I love you baby
One night love
Can’t stop thinking about you baby
One night love
Ain’t no way around it baby
One night love
I think I love you baby
Maybe there’s a tomorrow...

salut
e.
breathe deep and live
Pedant
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Re: one night love

Post by Pedant »

elazar wrote:this is a song i wrote this morning about two nights ago.it's simplistic but true. kinda "baby" heavy, but it's a song so whatever.

One night love
I think I love you baby
One night love
Can’t stop thinking about you baby
One night love
Ain’t no way around it baby
One night love
I think I love you baby

You flew into my broken head
You warmed up my lonely bed
But now you’re flying on home
Leaving me like an unfinished poem

One night love
I think I love you baby
One night love
Can’t stop thinking about you baby
One night love
Ain’t no way around it baby
One night love
I think I love you baby

I won’t ever ever ever forget
The magic spell which you’ve set
It was a one night love baby
It was a one night love baby

One night love
I think I love you baby
One night love
Can’t stop thinking about you baby
One night love
Ain’t no way around it baby
One night love
I think I love you baby
Maybe there’s a tomorrow...

salut
e.
this would be better as a song.

I don't like the "salut" line nor the sly reference to ecstasy.
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Post by elazar »

pedant thanks for reading my song and commenting. the "salut" is not a line of the song, merely my signature. though it works well in "famous blue raincoat", once you mention it. i had no intention to make any reference to ecstasy, but i like it that you found your own interpretation. thats something which makes art and music so good in my opinion is that it can be personal for each person in so many various ways.

salut
e.

p.s. i figured out that the e. is what you thought of ecstacy... well it's elazar.
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