With regard to the poetry, it varies. There are those of us who appreciate it is, the heart and intent of it, and consider ourselves not experts, yet if the writer is willing, will offer a few constructive comments as we see fit.
There are some who take a more pedantic tack with it and put it under the proverbial microscope. You'll have no difficulty figuring out which it is

. Whatever you encounter, don't let it deter you. The majority will appreciate what you've written.
With regard to Leonard, that's sounding
exceedingly like a mistaken identity of some sort. The information you've given doesn't align at all with the current situation in Leonard's life. Perhaps, years ago; or a film of him from years ago; or someone imitating and/or doing a likeness of him, or having a 'similar' style; someone by the name of Leonard [something] or of [something] Cohen; or he
wondered if Leonard could ever end up like that [the answer to
that is no]. Leonard by
no means needs to hang out in small/seedy clubs doing performances. At this juncture, his fans are praying for a world tour... poetry or song. No one cares, or at least not much. Something's wrong with the information you've gotten; how you're remembering it; or how you took it in, in the first place. Take it from one who knows, how these things can happen, it could be any one of those

. The only other possibility might be, "Hey, Anjani... we're in town here for the night, anyway. Shall we go slummin' it and see what people think? See if anyone recognizes me? I could try out some of these new poems. Shall we?" or "Let me show you how it was in the 'good ol' days'" or "If you can sit in the back, Anjani, and let me know how my voice carries, how it sounds... " ~ however, do I really
think either of those? No

. But, they're absolutely the only scenarios I can devise that might explain such an encounter between Layne and Leonard, if it wasn't a Writer and Poet's seminar, with Leonard speaking. Please let us know what Layne says after you've asked him. Layne's performances, meanwhile, sound very intrigueing.
We had a Member's Poetry Contest here a couple years ago... the theme was Seedy Hotel. This scenario could've fit right in with that.
~ Lizzy