For Lennie and his New Work

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George.Wright
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For Lennie and his New Work

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a Montreal montrose
the Hydra partisan
the beautiful losers of I'm your man
the man who walked the water for Suzanne
the dealer with his tired arm
His favourite game is to recluse from Harm
the gypsy violin and the oude
his romanticism will preclude
the boyish face and his charm
his knowledge will alarm
and furrow the fields of establishment
the new Jerusalem and his feet will cement
the tabernackle and the tent
and here he will not be content
embrace the magick of the Zen
and begin to write with his best pen
the Ten New Songs that Buddha sent
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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Post by lizzytysh »

I like this one, Georges.
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George.Wright
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Thanks, Liz I tried not to be too surreal.
Georges
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
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Post by Vesuvius »

George, I especially liked the last line: "I am sorry we are only half human."
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Thanks for your comments, the last line is my signature at the end of each posting..............very Phillip K Dick.
Georges
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Post by George.Wright »

Thanks for your comments, the last line is my signature at the end of each posting..............very Phillip K Dick.
Georges
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Post by Vesuvius »

I am sorry George, I should have realized that it was a signature.
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