Magician's Villanelle
Magician, suspect what you see
Don't descend into your dream
You know your world is illusory
There is no you, or me
Things are not the way they seem
Magician, suspect what you see
Do you want to be free?
Don't slip into the stream
You know your world is illusory
Choose who you wish to be
Opt out of the team
Magician, suspect what you see
Don't fight with phantoms, flee
Rise to the top like cream
You know your world is illusory
Listen to my plea
With wisdom eye, deem!
Magician, suspect what you see
You know your world is illusory
Sean Hunt (Windermere Feb 2nd 2015)
Magician's Villanelle
Magician's Villanelle
Last edited by daka on Tue Feb 03, 2015 7:06 pm, edited 2 times in total.
If you don't become the ocean you will be seasick every day....Jikan (aka Leonard Cohen)
It's comin' from the feel that this ain't exactly real, or it's real, but it ain't exactly there! . Jikan
It's comin' from the feel that this ain't exactly real, or it's real, but it ain't exactly there! . Jikan
Re: Magician's Villanelle
The repetition works really well Sean,
contentiously bringing the reader back to the theme/message.
nicely done.
contentiously bringing the reader back to the theme/message.
nicely done.