story of a drunk

[peter danielsen]

It should have been needles
but this bottle is fine
the wine is authentic
and your smile is a sign

And sorrow is always
the lonely hearts call
so cheers to you baby
let go, have a ball

We will drink all night
and then weep all day
my soul is a hunter
and your heart is the prey

I dont even care
if I die from it all
so cheers to you baby
let go, have a ball

[lizzytysh]

Hi Peter,
You've really captured the sad, sorrowful, and fatalistic view of an alcoholic/drug addict....who realizes there's a problem, but hasn't determined or decided what to do about it. It's full of dark feeling and captures the drunk.
~Lizzytysh

[George.Wright]

very fatalistic but thats how addictions can be. Beautiful summary of the psyche of self destruction. Excellent!!
Georges