A love song

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Lazysuit
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A love song

Post by Lazysuit »

And just to throw the coin again, let me share this one that I really like so any negative comments had better be very well written...

'And when we awoke, she was in a bad mood
So I had three lines of speed
Not my usual two
We walked to the gallery
Or took the tube?
And she took in a thousand years worth of painting
In a minute or two.

'C'mon we're leaving' she said
I was trying to catch the eye
Of an old man in a prison
Where he was waiting to die.
Sat with his son
And with his son's child
My heart it was tearing
At this history filed
'I'm not ready' I said
'I need to be here a while'.

She's not cool
Comes on all petulant
And I'm screaming back
'Well just fuck off you cunt'

I'm suprised the security stood by and watched
But she looks like Sohia Loren
She's got these I-Own-This-Town looks

And i'm screaming at her
'You've seen it already
In five minutes you've seen it all?'
And the security let me

Maybe they saw that i was in love with you
And that you were in love with me
And that we were in need
Of some different kind of security.'
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fishfishquaileye
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Re: A love song

Post by fishfishquaileye »

there are some good lines here, which you obviously stole form some sleeping cunt
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