In the I of a needle

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Violet
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Re: In the I of a needle

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quaiileyedsnowfish wrote:Reep what you sew
in the I of a needle
ego stitching
phoenix rising
like Cleopatra's sandwich-box
or Joseph's pallet of many colours

Seep what you row
upon a harness of freedom
bound to be free
your liberty at steak
medium done
with fries on the cider

a teacher cries with applez beside
her favourite pupil
is in her left eye
and her favourite I
is her pupil-lover
detained for insurrection
.. don't you think insurrection is a bit harsh?

Now, triple-eye.. I have a headache.. and am fighting a severe case of pointlessness.. ANYWAY.. just a suggestion.. but maybe you could put all of your crap on one never-ending crapper of a thread.. that way, we can just visit one crappy place, instead of having to see your triple-eyed nonsense all over the place. Just a suggestion.

I'm noticing that "applez" has become something of a theme for you.. here it seems to have led to pupil.. as in student.. then, as in eye, as in apple of the teacher's eye.. oh, left eye.. (pardon me).. OH.. I get it now.. it's her pupil lover.. detained for

oh.. I see now.

Well, that's alright, then.

Violet
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