barred spider

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quaileyedsnowfish
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barred spider

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in a applaus that speaks for you
like a eyesight that seeks
for your ocean book

and like the historian brings flowers of flowing
to your words of growth
the partition of it's home
sweating like candy from space

its wartime for poems who met
the burn of the exploded
mirrows
can i reward his signing decay
olso when people like me to be a barred spider
not a prisoner with a repetoir of defeated prayers


i'm speeding like a melody
that knocks like a bass of a wrest
like the sear of soiling constancy
let it reap let them
row
Ren1
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Re: barred spider

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quaileyedsnowfish wrote:in a applaus that speaks for you
like a eyesight that seeks
for your ocean book

and like the historian brings flowers of flowing
to your words of growth
the partition of it's home
sweating like candy from space

its wartime for poems who met
the burn of the exploded
mirrows
can i reward his signing decay
olso when people like me to be a barred spider
not a prisoner with a repetoir of defeated prayers


i'm speeding like a melody
that knocks like a bass of a wrest
like the sear of soiling constancy
let it reap let them
row
THIS WAS MY BEST ONE YETTI AND NO-ONE HAS COMMENT, WOT A CRAZY WORLD. WHATEVERS!
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Violet
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Joined: Thu May 24, 2007 11:07 pm
Location: New York

Re: barred spider

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Ren1 wrote:
quaileyedsnowfish wrote:in a applaus that speaks for you
like a eyesight that seeks
for your ocean book

and like the historian brings flowers of flowing
to your words of growth
the partition of it's home
sweating like candy from space

its wartime for poems who met
the burn of the exploded
mirrows
can i reward his signing decay
olso when people like me to be a barred spider
not a prisoner with a repetoir of defeated prayers


i'm speeding like a melody
that knocks like a bass of a wrest
like the sear of soiling constancy
let it reap let them
row
THIS WAS MY BEST ONE YETTI AND NO-ONE HAS COMMENT, WOT A CRAZY WORLD. WHATEVERS!
.. Ren1.. it is the holidays, you need to exercise some patience.. why, I was even considering doing a serious comparative study of your work and quailfish's.. so don't get your boxers all in a twist, my god..

.. oh, wait.. I guess the comparative study would be between both of your personalities.. (is there a host personality, by the way?.. might be good to know)..

.. anyway, so far, the historian bringing flowers captures me.. (libraries can be quite sexy, and somehow it puts me in mind of lovely violets pressed inside the yellowing leaves of old novels)..

.. Alright, well, be good, Ren1.. there's still the chance that Santa may change his mind..

v. x
Violet
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Violet
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Re: barred spider

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quaileyedsnowfish wrote:in a applaus that speaks for you
like a eyesight that seeks
for your ocean book

and like the historian brings flowers of flowing
to your words of growth
the partition of it's home
sweating like candy from space

its wartime for poems who met
the burn of the exploded
mirrows
can i reward his signing decay
olso when people like me to be a barred spider
not a prisoner with a repetoir of defeated prayers


i'm speeding like a melody
that knocks like a bass of a wrest
like the sear of soiling constancy
let it reap let them
row
.. you know that's kinda good, actually..
Violet
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