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adieu

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goodbye
july
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Bonjour
August

Nah- that doesn't really work as well does it? *sigh*

Namaste Augast - ??

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Alsiony wrote:
>Nah- that doesn't really work as well does it?

i defy anybody to compose a more concise rhyming short verse than mine, alsiony. somebody call guinness!!
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I Think,

Bye Bye
July

Sounds better Geoffrey...

Goodbye
July

Sounds formal and starchy

Where as

Bye Bye
July

Sounds softer and sexier.

Oh well you say it your way I’ll say it mine


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Geoffrey wrote:Alsiony wrote:
>Nah- that doesn't really work as well does it?

i defy anybody to compose a more concise rhyming short verse than mine, alsiony. somebody call guinness!!
hehe :)

You are right - Namaste Augast has more letters in it - so it is not a worthy contender - however Karrens bye bye July has fewer letters but more words - so how does that work out according to Guinness then? :lol:

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Alsiony wrote:
>Karrens 'Bye bye July' has fewer letters but more words - so how does that work out according to Guinness then?


pay no heed to that bride of satan, my delicious little strawberry truffle - for though she is indeed a candidate for guinness, it would be in a completely different section of their book.
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Dearest Geoffrey Darling,

I can’t exactly remember when we got married, it’s kind of fuzzy in this delicate little mind of mine,(due to your constant mental torture). And how come you can call Alsiony your delicious little strawberry truffle and yet you only call me your neurotic little passion fruit?
And please do tell what part of the Guinness book of records do you think I belong in?

Still think my

Bye Bye
July

Is better than yours…It flows better…as I said, yours is quite formal and harsh. Sort of reflects the writer…

Oh and Bye-Bye is all one word in the dictionary, all be it hyphenated.
Shall you phone Guinness or shall I?

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Well,
sorry if this is selfish of me - but I simply don't care about the Guinness book any more because I am a -
...delicious little strawberry truffle
:D
hehe
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I'm sorry, it's late I've been working long hours, but I've just have to say that this reminds me of Karren and Geoffrey .(plus I've been imbibing in a bottle of milk)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-T0I5UepXMA

Karren is the tiger and Geoffrey the snake ,please don't take offence but I think that Karren has the upper hand here and the snake is no match for the tiger! meeaow!
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Hey! May.
yeah, well, errrrm, hum, yeah, ok, I dunno, articulation is not my fing, who cares, SHUT IT YOU MUPPET, blah blah blah
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You Win!

But Geoffrey's not going to like it...

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Sideways wrote:Hey! May.
Ugh!
August
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Sorry V but i don't think that works!!

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.. (yes it does.. it's one of those "almost" rhymes)..
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almost what?

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