A Dedication -

This is for your own works!!!
Post Reply
User avatar
Alsiony
Posts: 708
Joined: Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:02 pm
Location: Answers on a postcard please

A Dedication -

Post by Alsiony »

There are many thoughts that I have about Leonard Cohen,
And I felt like putting just a few simple words here...



A Dedication -


As I take me down the rivers
The rivers of my mind
At times the words I know so well
At times - all newness I find

And as I take me down my rivers
They cross over your writings, your song
I feel the old and I learn to feel new
I feel lost, yet I feel I belong
But always the depths they evolve -
Into layers of words I will dive
For they speak their own language to me
But I know the beat of their ageless life
Always there is an openness
Where the heads of nails are hit
Dually - cut me to the quick -
And catch me in sheltering bliss

So as I take me down those rivers
Where I come by to visit you
Through all of your swamps and your springs
Into the old and into the new
I suddenly feel the weight change
I realise I'm without my boat
But it is alright – I am happy
For it is on your words that I float

A
xx
Weybridge MBW 11th July 2009

'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank

'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe

Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
User avatar
mat james
Posts: 1847
Joined: Sat May 27, 2006 8:06 am
Location: Australia

Re: A Dedication -

Post by mat james »

I enjoy where you are floating from, A.
Leonard has this affect on me a lot as well.
And yes, (if I read your thoughts/intent correctly): always it is still "my" journey; not just me on "his" journey.

Mat.XX
"Without light or guide, save that which burned in my heart." San Juan de la Cruz.
User avatar
Alsiony
Posts: 708
Joined: Tue Sep 15, 2009 4:02 pm
Location: Answers on a postcard please

Re: A Dedication -

Post by Alsiony »

Thanks Mat

Yes - you did read me right :)

Amongst other things - he speaks in 'his own language', from the point of view of his own journey, and it translates to me on mine. Pretty cool! :D

A
x
Weybridge MBW 11th July 2009

'All I know - and you must listen very carefully to this... All I know - is that I know absolutely nothing' - Frank

'Who ever loved that loved not at first sight?' - Christopher Marlowe

Much misunderstood... was the 'Hippie' with a reality fixation...
Post Reply

Return to “Writing, Music and Art by the Forum members”