Insomnia

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jabble524
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Insomnia

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Insomnia

Romance awakens the unconscious
And in heartbreak it never sleeps
An insomnia of revelations
Shattered promises, we swore to keep

Paper tigers and Icarus wings
Fly to the sun, when the siren sings
Oedipus eyes to navigate the maze
False bravado, caught in the minotaur’s gaze

Your Prometheus Kiss
Stole the fire from my heart
The eagle is my friend
But you tear me apart

Luscious lips and Freudian slips
Red herrings lead me into your arms
Denial is a warm bed, and a lustful lover
On a night of cold truth
GinaDCG
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Re: Insomnia

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I love the abrupt, cold ending.
jabble524
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Re: Insomnia

Post by jabble524 »

Thanks Gina. I think that denial can often be a very cold and abrupt emotion.
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