poem

[Alsiony]

(Withdrawn for competition)

[j6ppc]

I lke it Alisony.
it evokes far more
than 6 lines would suggest.

Thanks for sharing it.


--edited to include the word more

[Alsiony]

Thanks Jon

I am so happy you have said that! I haven't a clue how anything I've ever written would come across to someone else.
I wanted to get across the idea that, that which is fleeting - is not automatically therefore lacking in any depth of meaning - as is also the case with the memory it's written about, and the act of remembering it.
Thanks again for your comment
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