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Sandra
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despite all

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The river flows
and gives and order
Go òn!
I hear laughter, noise and blows
someone says it is the world
I smile
I laugh
I eat
I embrace and love
despite all
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Hi Sandra ~

This poem seems very much inspired by Arno's. They make lovely companions :) .

[The river gives "an" order, right? I'm guessing that's what you meant to type.]

It's so true, the state of the world and our struggle to move through it, with some semblance of personal equilibrium and peace within.

Love,
Lizzy
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