truly romantic love story

[iveta]

for so long we accept
I'm no sweet princess
you're neither Diogenes nor G.B.Shaw

still when hiking and the nature gets postcardish
you ask "So now you know what a love is?"
and I say: "Oh yes, it's the most correct and proper thing so necessary to preserve the humankind."

whoops what if that wasn't sweet enough?
but you're not pathetic but so wise
laughing out loud, still having fun with me




just trying to learn writing chocolate box junk as it frequently turns profitable these days

[Jayne Sachs]

I read this shortly after you posted it, and it's popped back into my brain several times since first reading it. There's something evocative about it. Thank you.

Jayne

[iveta]

There's something evocative about it.

Oh, thank you Jayne.

When telling the story or writing, it's so difficult to tell evocative from provocative, and provokacative from boring....

But compliments sound just beautiful from such a decadent poet