A new effort

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Henning
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A new effort

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"Aren't you tired
of your beauty tonight,
how can you carry your burden
under the stars ?

Just your hair
just your lips
enough to crush you
can't you see where I'm running
the heavy Berlin Morgenpost
with your picture in it
under my arms"

I really hope you like my new poem. I think it is so much better than the good, the bad and the ugly.

Germany, August 14, 2002 (Smiling again) :D
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Henning,

I think The Good....Ugly" was great! However, I think the sentiments of this one are probably more pleasing to you personally, for personal reasons. I like it.

~Lizzytysh
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