unsprung

[elazar]

i flew into a panic
where has my card gone
my crushing titanic
sweating like a common con

then the banker told me
i had left it in the atm
someone's returned it,gee
i felt the pressure in my cranium

dissipate and i was left
with a madness there
feeling flighty and deft
i strolled in second gear

i looked at the passers by
works of art all of them
this one low this one high
my mind a ragged hem

salut,
elazar

[Makera]

I loved this 'anxiety-to-whew!' rollercoaster, Elazar. I think most of us can relate to that 'near(social)death' experience!

~Makera

[elazar]

makera ,thanks!
i wrote this in "real time"...i was suprised at the spelling mistakes and title i had given it when i returned to it later on a rollercoaster is a perfect way to discribe the incident.

salut,
elazar