My friend and lover

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ritamarie
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My friend and lover

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You stand here before me, with your
Cinder eyes blazing with passion
Your aura draws me into more
Energy than I could fashion

Your eyes engulf my line of sight
It’s not just you inside those eyes
Timeless knowing, realm-less living

You’re beautiful with boundless might
There’s no more you, just endless skies
Blessed with one soaring bird’s giving

Most gentle breeze touches my cheek
Breathes in my enraptured body
I feel whole, but I have to peek
At the eternal light…I’m naughty

Tearful joy ripples in my eye
Imbuing endless light shimmers:
Life’s complexity made limpid

I love you now, I’ll love you by
The rocks of time graced with glimmers
My love won’t die, nor turn vapid
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brightnow
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Re: My friend and lover

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That's... beautiful.
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imaginary friend
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Re: My friend and lover

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Hi ritamarie,

While I was reading this, it occurred to me it could be about Leonard (as in a response to seeing him in concert)...
ritamarie
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Re: My friend and lover

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Hi Imaginary Friend,
I wrote this for someone I know a lot more intimately than Leonard, but you're right, it could have been....
'The One' exists in all of us.
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