Innovators Requiem

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mirrormist
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Innovators Requiem

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Innovators Requiem

genuflection on sanitised trash can lids
for the demise of linear free improvisation
that didn’t cut enough edge for an
"I want an award generation”
from compressed air reverberation
of the factory floors
to the “how very interesting sets”
on the coffee shop tours
misconstruing cutting edge anti-tradition
for a soft pair of slippers and an auntie’s volition
this isn’t a boundary pushing bohemian rap you see
It’s just a gap where avant-garde used to be.
"Wearing dark glasses protects my blindness from the dangers of enlightenment"
Cate
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Re: Innovators Requiem

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Hi Mirrormist,

I like your rhythm. This felt good to read out load.
mirrormist
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Thankyou for your appreciation Cate
Best wishes
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