puppet of dust (B.O.M. , 11. 40 )

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mat james
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puppet of dust (B.O.M. , 11. 40 )

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...puppet of dust

From the limp limbs of fallen strings
and long nosed lies
a pine-nut dreams
of long ears
and a field of miracles
to Catchfools

...like me

weeping a deathly sorrow
playing for mercy
we shrink;
to build a will to Your kisses
of awakening:

disentangle one lumbering boy,
moisten and lift a dying seed;
-this puppet of dust.

Puppeteer:
Papa-tear !
-dance mannequin to man.


Mat James
(reflections on B.O.M. 11.40, by Leonard Cohen)
*pine-nut (Pinocchio)
viewtopic.php?f=10&t=9987&start=165
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pinocchio
Last edited by mat james on Mon Mar 23, 2009 6:03 am, edited 4 times in total.
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Re: puppet of dust (B.O.M. , 11. 40 )

Post by Cate »

Mmmm very nice,
this is a good tactic to get people to the book of Mercy thread - I think you should be in advertising ;-)
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I'm impressed Mat, I think you've done a great job of connecting/combining Pinocchio and II.40.
You piece well written, sad and softly sensual.
I wonder if Leonard enjoyed the Pinocchio story as a boy? I somehow think so, as he has always seemed to love magical things.
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