This is my new poem

[Marisha]

each passing day
takes me one step closer
to next week
but
further away from last week
this teaches me
nothing

[lizzytysh]

How about if it teaches you something about the march of time?

[Though I like your somewhat cynical ending better.]


~ Lizzy

[piñata heart]

I like this a lot, Marisha. It's vey Zen. I don't know if that's what you were intending, but that's how I read it.

Time is the only constant...everything else is meaningless. That's what I took from this.

Thanks for sharing!

[lizzytysh]

And you're likely right on that, Pinata ... especially with "nothing" getting such emphasis.


~ Lizzy