Moose

[Ren]

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[Geoffrey]

Ren has started unloading his back catalogue with:

1. Drip (23 Feb)
2. Stupid (24 Feb)
3. She's Not Vicky (25 Feb)
4. Amoebas Are People Too (26 Feb)
5. Gravity Burgers (27 Feb)
6. Samwidge (27 Feb)
7. Moose (27 Feb)


mickey_one wrote:
>i wish I hadn't been driven away by charmless people who arrive here for the first time, do not stop to introduce themselves but post their back catalogue in one go. They love their shit so much they even copyright it.


Is this what you mean? At least this one isn't copyrighting it, Mickey.

[anunitu]

I see that the things that creep in the dark, will seem to live, but the dark is a deception, there is no life just a manikin pretending at life and possession of a soul. Definition of manikin..Link below.

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/manikin

Anunitu

[Geoffrey]

anunitu wrote:
>I see that the things that creep in the dark, will seem to live, but the dark is a deception, there is no life just a manikin pretending at life and possession of a soul. Definition of manikin . . .


Couldn't have put it clearer myself. You are saying that I am a tight-rope walker and that mickey_one is just the pole I carry to help me across, right? Brilliant!

[Diane]

I read one of your poems the other day and remember thinking it was quite fun, Ren. All the best.

[anunitu]

what I wrote means, a fool seeks after something that he believes exists only to find it is Dross.You seek after truth, and because it exists not within you, it exists not without.

Anunitu

[lizzytysh]

Hi Ren ~

I'm coming late into this movie, but I have read this thread and then looked for your other poems. Vicky is the only one that remains. The others show as deleted via a period or [the majority] as "The requested topic does not exist." You know, Ren, everyone has faults, and they're not all the same one and, even if they are, they manifest differently. There are worse things you could say or do here than post 7 poems in a row without introducing yourself. Really, much worse. I'm sorry to see you succumb to deletion because some others find your having posted them as you did not to their liking. I'm glad that your Vicky one remains with positive comments. I enjoyed it, too. Welcome to this Forum, Ren.


~ Lizzy

[anunitu]

I am saddened that Ren has left, and I am angry that he was driven away by fools and worse. Small minds, believing their small persons and small lives are better than others. Snide remarks trying to pass as intellectual banter.


Anunitu

[Sideways]

I am saddened that Ren has left, and I am angry that he was driven away by fools and worse. Small minds, believing their small persons and small lives are better than others. Snide remarks trying to pass as intellectual banter.


Anunitu

When I first read this post by Anunitu I thought that I am saddened that Anunitu has stayed and I am angry he has been driven here by fools and worse. Small legs, believing that small sausages and small eggs are butter than others. Kind remarks trying to pass as intellectual bingo. Then I remembered a song of great meaning that taught me that "no less than the trees and the stars he has the right to be here". Ren may have left but he is still right. We can pray he returns. In 1994 in a Regional Quick-Steam Semi-Final several blouses also left in mysterious circumstances, then they returned an hour before the Steam-Off was due to begin!!! That gives me hope that perhaps Ren will return in a steam-driven carriage driven by Geoffrey! I know Geoffrey didn't mean to be unkind because there is not a bone in his body. Geoffrey picked on Ren as a follow-down from mickey-one's complaint. But was mickey thinking of Ren, we can never know because mickey has gone, like a hung-out kerchief too curly to be pressed back into square and smooth. Yet Ren showed a spark, yes a tiny tiny spark, but even his bad scan and bad rhyme didn't hide that spark of fun and witty. Are we to damp out the spark of someone else? I say no, and no. Three times NO!. Ren didn't put the silly (c) and as far as I could (c) wasn't himself a silly (c). He didn't say "I am Ren and I will use apostrophe when I want to".
Ren Ren
apostrophe when
Ren will you return?
I hope it is soon
before the seventh moon
now and then
I think of Ren.

Last night I had a "steam-up" with one more woman and one man who had to work so hard to satisfy us both. I know I was the winner. I was better than the others although it brings many a bush to say so. I can feel my cheeks burning even now.

love

Sue


I have deleted my photos as I don't want to offend anyone and I certainly don't want to turn Anunitu's soul into moose! But yes it is wonderful to have a fetish- how glorious to own the worm that eats one's brain!!

[Geoffrey]

anunitu wrote:
>Snide remarks trying to pass as intellectual banter.


Yes, they are the worst kind, but I haven't seen any here, Anunito. Are you sure such Dross exists not without you, but within? Let me see a couple.

[anunitu]

Here is a thought, flood a thread with photos of your fetishes, the worm that eats inside your brain.

[Sideways]

anunitu wrote:
>Snide remarks trying to pass as intellectual banter.


Yes, they are the worst kind, but I haven't seen any here, Anunito. Are you sure such Dross exists not without you, but within? Let me see a couple.

Geoffrey, one thing you can be surer is that Anunitu means no harm. His soul is gentle like the wind. His snide remarks speak only of insecure not nastiness to anyone at all.

[Geoffrey]

anunito wrote:
>Here is a thought, flood a thread with photos of your fetishes, the worm that eats inside your brain.


Is this a snide remark? I don't understand you.

[Geoffrey]

Sideways wrote:
>Geoffrey, one thing you can be surer is that Anunitu means no harm. His soul is gentle like the wind. His snide remarks speak only of insecure not nastiness to anyone at all.


I don't understand him at all. Have to go out now (there is an exhibition at a hotel) but will look in later.

[anunitu]

I am surprised you don't put up a site of your own, invite all the poets in the world to come post.


Anunitu