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Sandra
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You left to the ways you wanted
And I remained thinking about your outbursts
Your laughter, your kisses of sagacious boy
I remember you going to school
With your grey suit
You were so near and so far
I loved you but I did not know it
Love grows with silence and distance
Good bye brother be well......
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Sandra, the resonance of a heartstring. Thank you for this 'moving' piece. Byron 'sends his regards.'
"Bipolar is a roller-coaster ride without a seat belt. One day you're flying with the fireworks; for the next month you're being scraped off the trolley" I said that.
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I also see a bittersweet, yet graceful, acceptance of life, Sandra. It'll be the second time today that I say, "Hindsight is 20/20." :( yet :) . Acceptance.
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what a beautiful word Byron....heartstring....there is not a single word in spanish to mean that
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Sandra, gracias. tal vez mas sentido ?
I have no Spanish and searched several diccionarios to show my appreciation.
Byron 'sends his regards.' :wink:
"Bipolar is a roller-coaster ride without a seat belt. One day you're flying with the fireworks; for the next month you're being scraped off the trolley" I said that.
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what is more or less than a touch?

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:) Byron, I have noticed that some words reflect more accurately what they mean in other language than our native .
I appreciate your words in spanish very much and more in that "gringo" way....
the important thing is to communicate...isn´t it?
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sandra

i do like the expressed sentiment and the phasing.

Kind regards

Ben
Life rewards action, just as well done is better than well said. Yours the Galactic Pixie
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thank you Ben.......better to talk about poems...... :)
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