therefore

elazar · Post by **elazar** » Thu Jul 31, 2003 10:34 am

therefore the winds demanded
to be swift and free
forgotten to paths and energy
unspoiled by the memory

therefore the sun demanded
to be unbridled and blithe
dazzle and violently brazen
sovereign by the luminescence

therefore the moon demanded
to be lustrous and lithe'ly
momentous and meagersome
propagated by the circumstance

therefore the sea demanded
to be winsome and wanton
unharried and humungous
refresher by the bewitched

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Thu Jul 31, 2003 11:09 am

Salute, a nice wee poem, elazar
Georges

greta · Post by **greta** » Thu Jul 31, 2003 5:21 pm

i relly like this poem!!!!

elazar · Post by **elazar** » Fri Aug 01, 2003 2:37 am

georges and greta,
thank you for the comments,

salut
elazar

Coco · Post by **Coco** » Fri Aug 01, 2003 4:40 am

Hi elazar,

This is a wonderful poem.

I particularly liked your use of the word "demanded". This poem has a very vigorous cadence to it!

elazar · Post by **elazar** » Fri Aug 01, 2003 5:21 am

hi coco,
yes i was attempting to employ cadence.i labored on this for a while.and,thank you for the comment!:D

salut
elazar

lizzytysh · Post by **lizzytysh** » Fri Aug 01, 2003 8:34 am

The winds, the sun, the moon, the sea ~ they chose their spaces well.