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jillian0108
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Re: Iniation
Wow, Jillian. Very gently steamy. I keep wanting to come up with "succumbed" for your last word rather than "accepted;" yet the former has too negative an association. Yet, does prey accept anything? I don't know or know if you care. I also want to make "Iniation" be "Initiation." In any case, enjoyed reading this transitioning from a want-ad for a position through to unanticipated seduction.
~ Lizzy
~ Lizzy
"Be yourself. Everyone else is already taken."
~ Oscar Wilde
~ Oscar Wilde
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jillian0108
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imaginary friend
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Re: Invitation
Gee Jillian,All along I thought the 'he' who accepted was a 'she'
Re: Invitation
I thought he was a she too 
Initiation would have made a good title if this was true.
Invitation is all right, but what if you tied the title into the want ad.
Initiation would have made a good title if this was true.
Invitation is all right, but what if you tied the title into the want ad.
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jillian0108
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