obsession

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magneticcry
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obsession

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The fish in my brains,
the worm in my heart.
It's causing me pain
and doing me harm.
The shadow in dreams,
the hurricane in soul.
and noone can heal
this terrible howl.

The reason my mind
is empty and sad
The reason my heart
is bleeding so bad
the reason is YOU!

The man that I love
the one that i need
MY hero,my god
my fabulos dream
the moon in the sky
a star up so high
the nightingale flying
through darkness and light

Your hands reaching out for me
you're standing and smiling
your eyes looking through me
can see that i'm crying
i'm crying...

Not in the vision
but only in heart
the drops that are falling-
not tears but my blood
The blood of my soul
Is causing your tears
to drop from your eyes
and water my fears

You're wiping youre eyes
you're running away
you've broken my heart
with hatred and pain
You killed all my dreams
you tortured my mind
You made me believe
that now i must die

so...

I jump to the waves
and the thought crosses mind
all curses and spells
and you'll always be mine

The fish in my brain
the worm in my heart
You laugh at my grave
and yet you are my love

You're standing like stone
you're part of my death
you're rotting my bones
you've taken my breath

The fish in my brain
the worm in my heart
you'll never be able
to tear us apart
'Cause we're meant to be
Like heaven and sky
You're my destiny
and now you are mine

You are mine...
forever...
a tear is like a magnet- it always makes another tear to follow :(
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greta
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Post by greta »

great lyrics for a hit song but....where is the melody?
I like the poem but i have some questions
what do the fish and worm symbolize?
fish in my brains ? a man with an slippery-as-fish attitude you can't stop thinking of?
magneticcry
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Post by magneticcry »

well,don`t pretend that you don`t know the melody :)
and,you can be right about this fish-symbol,but at the beginning i didn`t take it that way...
no küll nüüd alles sai küsimusega hakkama ;)
vaata varsti hakkan "tagasi" tegema ;)
a tear is like a magnet- it always makes another tear to follow :(
George.Wright
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Post by George.Wright »

magneticcry a beautiful poem
set to an estonion love song?
it was very pretty
i could feel your emotion
Georges
I am a right bad ass, dankish prince and I love my Violet to bits.
magneticcry
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Post by magneticcry »

thank you!
actually it is not a set of an estonian song,i wrote it in english,and i also have the melody for it,but unfortunately i can`t write it down :(
so i guess i just have to sing it by myself all the time ....
a tear is like a magnet- it always makes another tear to follow :(
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