The creator and the created

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Fri Jul 25, 2003 1:46 pm

The creator and the created
moved by the black mass and his breath abated
twirling and twisting, trying to kiss our ass
time and space have no meaning, it's the memories that last
alone in the desert your body on a fast
enlightenment is coming like the sands in the hourglass
shaped like infinity, you turn it you see
once you realise the confines of whatever may be
your soul will escape forever, it's freedom in sight
and it will merge again into the warmth of the divine light
gone forever and out of the blue
it's very glad to escape from the crazy zoo
into the cycle that returns without meaning
the creator is always there and the created is always scheming
Love to the Board................
Georges

greta · Post by **greta** » Fri Jul 25, 2003 3:04 pm

great poem! I like the way you think.We think alike. If you hadn't written this poem. I would. Only using some other words

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Fri Jul 25, 2003 3:22 pm

Greta, thanks for your very kind words. How would you have written it? I made it up on line after a visit to the dentist, this morning where i read an article in National geographic on the exploration into the creation of the universe and galaxies.
Science says a Black Mass created the universe. This would appear to be good out of evil.
Perhaps they are right, for if you have no evil, you cannot guage what is good and vice-versa.
Let's see some more of your Estonian talent on the Board, Greta...........don't be shy
Best Regards..............Georges

greta · Post by **greta** » Fri Jul 25, 2003 7:15 pm

i think i'm not really able to use so sophisticated words in english..
I also think a lot about the Light and Peace... so your words touched me deeply

enlightenment is coming like the sands in the hourglass
shaped like infinity, you turn it you see"

This part of the poem is especcially to my understanding how we grow wiser and come to terms with ourselves. At 17 we are restless and egoistic maybe unable to see the "whole" of the world. Maybe as we grow older the "hourglass" fills up and we "see" the infinity.. maybe through our children?

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magneticcry · Post by **magneticcry** » Fri Jul 25, 2003 9:59 pm

wow! you can probably write a good poem about anything! i just read your "Childhood",and i have to admit that they are very different,but yet so similar...
You are great at putting your emotions into beautiful words,without losing the main point.

George.Wright · Post by **George.Wright** » Sat Jul 26, 2003 3:37 am

Dear greta and magnicry, thank you both for your touching words. I am certainly not an academic but have studied in the school of life. Often i am at the grass roots, where the weeds smother true thought, but you girls are there. The soul will flourish and soar, when it realises the true score and it's the comradeship there. I write to share for it is not my living.
I write for i have been there.
Thanks and Best Regards to you both..................Georges